LLB Personal Statement Sample, Arab, Bahrain, Applying to a University in the UK

I always look forward, striving for excellence, giving my all, which is why I was able to serve as Captain of my High School Football Team: a cool head, determination, grit, resolve, courage, and the last one to get tired. I also try to distinguish myself as a citizen and a responsible member of my community. I help to organize and staff a variety of charitable events and serve as a student representative as well as head of our Leadership Society. I have regularly worked at my grandfather's company, examining documents, reading contracts and draft agreements, and shadowing the company's lawyers. Thus, it is my hope that this will enable me to excel in your distinguished LLB Program at the University of XXXX.

An ambitious and principled young Arab man born and raised in the Kingdom of Bahrain, still only 19 and rather idealistic, I have a passion for social justice and equality under the law. This is why I have known for some time that I wanted to become an attorney. My sense of urgency and civic responsibility is enhanced by the fact I come from a troubled country with our share of social strife, ultimately a result of our constitution and legal structures that favor one religious tradition (Sunni Islam) over another (Shia Islam). I am Sunni, a product of the political elite of my country, and this fills me with a sense of historical responsibility to seek progressive change, social justice, and a peaceful and harmonious society. The religious divide between Sunni and Shia in Bahrain, as elsewhere, results in a divided society that is dysfunctional, and I look forward to devoting much of my professional lifetime as a student of law to the question of how constitutional amendments might be written and passed so as to restructure our society in a more egalitarian fashion, which I think is in the interests of the nation as a whole.

I hope to earn my LLB Degree at the University of XXXX because I see it as the best fit for my interests and aspirations, not only because of your unparalleled reputation but also the interest of your faculty in legal questions especially pertinent to the Middle East, human rights, and religious freedom. My keen interest in the political and ideological divisions in my country and the way that they tend to result in injustice has me very excited about the prospect of giving my life to the study of law and learning about many other countries and their legal contexts and struggles that will help me to better understand the challenges that we face in Bahrain.

My dream is to hold a high governmental position in my country at some point where I will be able to contribute to progressive political developments, not only in Bahrain but throughout the Arab world. I see the University of XXXX to be the ideal learning environment in which to think about progressive legal solutions for entrenched legal challenges, particularly in the Middle East.

I am most interested in commercial and constitutional law, especially issues of corporate governance. Earning my law degree at the University of XXXX will provide me with the best professional preparation possible for any of several career directions that I might choose in the future: politics, commercial law, international relations, etc. There is a shortage of well-trained, internationally oriented, legal professionals in Bahrain and I seek to serve my community.

I also look forward to working to perfect my writing ability in English as a student in your program. I was a participant in our Model United Nations in Bahrain and this exercise is indicative of the thrust and direction of my intellectual engagement, speaking and debating as well as writing.

I thank you for consideration of my application to the LLB Program at the University of XXXX.


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While my PHD is in the area of Religion, I like to think of myself as more of a historian than a theologian. My focus has always been on moral theory and thinking as it relates to politics and international relations; yet, I have always been aware of how all of this invariably takes place on the foundation of Law. It is our legal system and its enforcement that makes moral thinking, dialogue, and, subsequently progress possible.

For the past 30 years, I have labored to stay current on most of the news coming out of the Developing World, Latin America, Africa, Asia, the Middle East. I have studied world religions and cultures extensively for decades. Fluent in Spanish, I am published in that language in the areas of history and gender studies.

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Law has been considered one of the most highly esteemed and revered university subjects since its very beginnings. Legal issues affect almost every crucial aspect of life, including business and environmental matters, economics, international relations, trade and politics. Many applicants choose to specialize in human rights, before focusing on other areas of law, or as a specialization that later leads on to a career in the international human rights legal framework, such as those who work in the field of immigration. With international integration on the rise alongside a massive shift in and exchange of worldviews, today’s law school applicants may be more inclined to strive towards a LLB Degree with a specialization in Human Rights Law, especially if it corresponds to their own personal, specific areas of interests. The other principal reason law students choose to study in the area of human rights is because they want the opportunity to divulge and defend on a number of 21st century legal issues, such as terrorism, indigenous rights, invasion of privacy and other topics related to international law in the real world.

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Sample 1st Paragraph for the LLB, British Pakistani

A British Pakistani who now holds the LLB Degree, I seek professional advancement and an opportunity to earn the LLM Degree so as to make my maximum contribution to my society in the areas of business, immigration, and human rights. I want to think of myself as a soldier for peace in times that are very trying for everyone, especially migrants coming to the UK and the rest of Europe from Muslim societies. XXXX University is my first choice among LLM programs because of its sheer excellence as well as its location.

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