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Blog posts : "admission essay"

Diversity Statement, African Applicant to Law School

My LSAT scores are on the low side, especially for XXXX. (Having English as a fifth language is a significant factor in this.) My diversity strengths are the key factor that I put forth towards my acceptance to Harvard. I am a man from Uganda who was born in a mud hut yet speaks fluent Korean. My li…

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JD Immigration Law, African Immigrant

As a survivor of widespread political violence as a child and adolescent growing up in Uganda, I feel strongly that my voice has much to contribute on a qualitative level to discussions of the critical issues of our day in the interlocking areas of national security and immigration. As an immigrant …

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JD Criminal Justice, African American Woman

I am a young black woman who is proud of the fact that I am not angry. I also feel strongly that black people are themselves responsible for most of their own problems and that they all need to pull themselves up by their own bootstraps to whatever extent that is possible. Nevertheless, I have studi…

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LLM Degree, Human and Civil Rights, Egypt

A young Egyptian man who has been living in New York City for the past 2.5 years studying English intensively in preparation for your program, I watch in great anguish from afar as so many noble young people are dying in my country, Egypt, in our quest for authentic democracy. For Egypt’s sons and d…

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LLM Masters, International Law, Turkey

I am a well qualified lawyer with substantial experience in Turkish law. My current work and higher studies relate to international law. I now seek to broaden my knowledge to encompass US law so that I can fulfill my ultimate goal of establishing a firm enabling international transactions between en…

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LLM International Law, Anti-Corruption, Cameroon

I am applying to your program in law because I strongly believe that graduating from XXXX University would provide me with the optimal preparation for a successful career in law that would enable me to establish a legacy of service to my people, in Cameroon. At am mature for 25 and have the highest …

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PHD International Law and Economics, Europe

For the last ten years of my life I have dedicated myself to the goal of helping my country, Slovakia, to advance in its integration with Europe. I was raised in Slovakia. My big break in life came early, at the age of 17, when I went to the United States and spent my last year of High School in Geo…

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LLM Personal Statement, International Corporate Law

I have no family connection to the law but I did harbor the occasional teenage fantasy in which I strode confidently around a courtroom amazing a jury with my persuasive oratory and pulling off an almost impossible courtroom coup resulting in a standing ovation from an appreciative audience.  I have…

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JD Personal Statement, Business Law, Azerbaijan

My desire to enter the legal profession dates back to my high school days in Baku, Azerbaijan; a period in which I began to understand how the government was rife with corruption, and that the legal system was far from just. I also reflected on the fact that a lack of respect for human rights had tu…

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Employment Law, LLB Example, Admission Help


“The direction in which education starts a man will determine his future life and this is why I have the most keen fascination with both education and employment law. It has been my desire to study law at degree level since the age of fifteen. The subject fascinates me because it brings together m…

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